Review

The genre is a cause-effect essay. This cause-effect essay is about being a twin. Yes, I have a twin. His name is tanner. There are many ups and downs. Some of the uppers are I am never bored. My ideas came from every time I think of being lucky to have a twin.





I always have loved being a twin even the younger one. There so many things to do. There was playing wich was not boring because I have someone to play with. Sometimes that leads to fighting. We always fight. At least once a day. But that only lasts about three to five minutes. I also have someone to help me with my homework, but sometimes having a twin can make you get less gifts. The best thing about being a twin is that I always have someone to play with!That prevents me from being bored. Even if i get bored Tanner will have another idea ready to go. We can go outside and wrestle or we can run around like fools. This lasts for about a hour. Then we will do something else. We barley spend any time inside. Sometimes some games end with fighting. Like one time we were seeing who could jump the highest, but when my pole when down it landed on Tanners head. That resulted in a pole stinging into my back. So I decided that I should get the last hit and thats what I did. I threw thepole at him and ran. Then he tackled me and I remembered that he was faster than me. So you see our fights sometimes get out of hand.He always helps me with my homework. But sometimes people think its cheating, for example Mrs. Shoemaker does. I really don't think it is cheating. He still get better grades than me. I don't care though. I know he is smarter than me. Theres are always pros and cons about this subject. The life of a twin is always has adventures. Most are good, some are bad. The bad ones don't last very long. So take my word for, if you believe in rencarnation. Hope to be a twin. Being a twin is the best thing in the world exsept being a triplet.

first semester

In this first semester, you taught me that reading can be fun. I read lot more than I used to. I didn't know what to do about tricks to easy writing. Then you showed me smiley face tricks! I also had a problem writing poems. You helped me rhyme. So all in all you should me the way to be a successful student. This will help me in the second semester.

I learned a lot about myself. For example I learned that I can make work fun. I also learned to do my best or it'll backfire. I finally just under stood the quote “When life gives you lemons, make lemonade". That means when you get something, don't waste it. So I think you helped me learn that. All in all I understand things better and also do my best at everything I do.

What I need to be a successful student is… I need to work harder. Do my best on everything I do. I will need to work harder than I did the first and second quarter. I will do everything right and not just skim through it. I will not wait to the last minute, but the last few days. I will do all of this and more.

Favorite piece

My genre is a essay. My favorite piece is the one that is about how to do something. I chose how to do a football hold. I use it very often because the other man can’t shoot to my legs if he does it going to be a painful ride down. I am moving into A division and I will do pretty well. I chose this topic because wrestling is my favorite sport.

Do you want to know how to force someone to cry in wrestling? What I am about to tell you is so exclusive that you can’t tell anyone. First of all you need to find someone who you can beat with some ease, or you’re in trouble! If they are good enough, he will get so mad that they will probably make you cry. So that’s one intriguing thing that can happen to you. Make sure he not very skilled in the art of wrestling. Until you do, keep your guard up, so he doesn’t make a unexpected move. But make sure you have a reason like he’s making fun of you or I-know-I-can-beat-anyone look. Then you get into the match. As he shoots, get a tight football hold on him. Jump into the air like there’s no tomorrow! He will smash his head into the mat. That will make him tear up. So you have to do an arced headlock. Last of all, Squeeze as hard as you can and make sure you get him on his back! After the match he will be balling!