Friday, February 26, 2010

bonus

On the bloodiest day of the year the Aztecs and the Mayans had a great battle over the rocks of Omistis. These were hundreds of rocks, huge and tiny that was a great place to make a defensive wall. If someone was driven back in a battle they could retreat to the rocks of Omistis. The battle took place right by the rocks at Hubbles creek. Nine hundred Aztecs showed up lead under the War Chief Ulimon. One thousand Mayans showed up lead under the War Chief Alimon. So before the battle the two war chiefs met up and tried to talk each other out of fighting, but neither were persuaded. The Two War Chiefs sent there men at each other. When the two Armies met hell was raised. Bones were broken, Brains were bashed, and tomahawks went into chests. When the battle was still roaring each side had about Three hundred men left, something surprising happened. The Iroquois Tribe from the Great Plains showed up with Two thousand warriors and slaughtered all of the Aztecs and Mayans. They destroyed The Rocks of Omistis with axes and spears. The after all was done. The victorious Iroquois Tribe went home and did a war dance.

2 comments:

  1. Haha that was intresting story. You should write another like that.

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  2. I am curious where you came up with the ideas for your most recent stories. You began with Aztecs and Mayans and then mentioned something about Iroquois, which confused me. When writing about different cultures, consider researching about them and historical events.

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